Moon, Mr, Moon

Thought of this while look at the moon from my window

 

Moon, Mr. Moon I see you in my window 

Shinning down on me from up above

Letting off you bright light

One of many among the stars

Moon, Mr. Moon looking down at me 

What changes you have seen 

Many times Earth has changed 

From young to old you have been there

Moon, Mr.Moon shinning down 

I look up at you beauty and light

Makes me wish I could fly to you 

Be able to touch your surface 

Moon, Mr,Moon I see from my window

The sky would be dark without you 

The stars would be duller at night 

I would miss your light illuminating through 

Moon, Mr, Moon keep on shinning down my window 

 

Reviews

[Nisreen]

I see so much in a simple moon
and your words speak it

very well done

[Inject Positivity]

im reading this and looking at Mr Moon from my window and thinking about how he witnessed every little change in this world whether it is bad or good... he has seen my tough nights as well as my happy nights.... a very thought provoking write manda....this is an ode to the moon...

[MandaBear]

Thanks. I am so glad you liked it

[Everheal]

I want to be in your window.
Looking down at you.
I wish you would fly to me and touch my surface.
I am the darkness in the sky.

Seriously, nice poem. It made me think of some creepy things I want to do, that the moon gets to do all the time.

[MandaBear]

Well, I am glad you liked it so much