Don't You Just Love....

Just something I came up with on the spot. Hope you like it.

Don't you just love when everything seems to be wrong 

Everything you do will be judged no matter what 

That feeling where just nothing will work out

It's all going to fall apart no matter how many times you pick up the pieces

Don't you just love that feeling its all down hill 

You roll with the punches but the punches keep coming

You try to grin and bear it but you just break down 

Like the world is against you 

Don't you just love it when you try and try again 

You are so defeated there is not point in getting up 

What little you have left doesn't seem worth it anymore

Where you just feel like giving up and letting go

Don't you just love that feeling? 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

everything that you have asked here i can relate manda... all the situations you have said are very very true... thank you for this one.... nice flow and it rhymes well too... it put me under deep thoughts.... hats off to you my fav poetess.... full ratings....

[Ralph Rosell]

Nice perspective on loving these feelings! Well written poem!
Just found an "s" missing in the last line of the first verse, timeS.*
Like how you ended it with this general question. Sort summed the poem in a way where it leaves the reader thinking, can we even love these feelings? Very nice MandaBear!

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much! I will go back and fix that. I am glad you liked it =)