Soldier (Tanka #22)

Soldier (Tanka #22)

A Poem by MandaBear
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Just something I came up with while talking to a friend

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My sweet dearest Soldier 
I had a big hole in my heart
A spot only you fill 
You've left an imprint on my heart 
You might say that I love you 

© 2015 MandaBear


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Aha! the lines "i had a big hole in my heart/a spot only you fill"....im speechless and you inspired me to write something.... clappings!!!! clappings!!!!.... 100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Just 5 lines to express someone, how much you like....
Absolute stunner!

Posted 9 Years Ago


MandaBear

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! This was just something off the top of my head. i'm glad you liked it =)
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Years Ago

I loved it :) You're most welcome my friend!
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Ada
Simple, powerful, and sweet.
Line four left the biggest impact to me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


MandaBear

9 Years Ago

I am glad that you liked it =)
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ron
Very sweet. I love this one

Posted 9 Years Ago


MandaBear

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I am glad you liked it. It just was something I thought of on the top of my head
ron

9 Years Ago

It was really good

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Added on June 6, 2015
Last Updated on June 6, 2015
Tags: soldier, love, poem, poetry, tanka


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