Missing You

I used the quote "I spread my dreams under you feet. Tread softly because you tread on my dreams" by W.B. Yeats

I miss you more than I should.

I know I shouldn't but I can't help it.

You make me feel so special. 

You make me smile, laugh and happy. 

You know how to make sad days disappear.

Even when you are having a bad day you always want to see me happy.

Even if your sad.

Any moment without you is a dull one.

My days are just a little grayer.

When you are near the sun shines bright.

The world seems a little less scary.

I miss you.

I wish you were here...

 

I spread my dreams under your feet. 

Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

Reviews

[samiha zubair]

Love is a very strong emotion. Your write deserves big applause

[MandaBear]

Thank you very much! I am really glad you liked it =)

[Ellay]

This is very beautiful and soo deep :) Loved it

[MandaBear]

Thanks! I am glad you liked it =)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Missing You hmm, its really a saddest part of our life to miss someone special....

[Stephen]

i really liked this poem as well. I agree that the ending is very nice. Thanks for sharing

[MandaBear]

Thank you I am so glad you enjoyed it =)

[J.R.H.]

Tread softly because you tread on my dreams

Great ending.

[ron]

A beautiful poem Manda.
I loved the last stanza...

I spread my dreams under your feet.
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

[MandaBear]

Thank you. It really is a great quote =) W.B.Yeats came up with =)

[ron]

But you made it better.

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much! I really like the quote so I had to make a poem out of it =) So romantic isn't it?

[ron]

Yes it is very romantic. Even if it is for a friend I think the friend would find it hard not to have their heart beat just a little faster.

[MandaBear]

I would hope that friend really enjoyed the poem as much as I had fun writing it

[ron]

I am sure they did, how could your friend not enjoy it.

[MandaBear]

I don't know some people are like that lol what can you do right lol

[Helen Crutchett]

Lovely poem MandaBear.

The given "phrase' worked well at the end of your poem.

Thank you for joining in the contest!

Kind regards,

Helena