Man In The Uniform

Inspired by another writer and ABBA of all things lol Hope you enjoy

I dream of you at night 

I see you in your uniform 

All neat and pressed 

Laying on your strong muscles 

I wonder what you are 

A Private ?

A Corporal ?

Perhaps a Master Sergeant ?

Whatever you are 

Will you make me your Private?

Take me in your strong arms 

Show me how a real man loves 

I see you in you uniform 

All neat and pressed 

Soon crumpled up

On my floor 

I will make you feel like the General of my body 

Give me all you got my Captain 

Drill my body until you are satisfied 

Throw me in the brig of you heart 

 I dream of you at night 

I see you in your uniform 

All neat and pressed 

I wonder where you are .....

Man in the Uniform

Reviews

[ron]

Wow this is beautiful and sensual.
Every soldiers dream to hear these words Manda.
Very well done, make me wish I was still in uniform ;)

[MandaBear]

Well you helped me with this poem so thank you! You inspired it too. So I am glad you liked it

[ron]

You are most welcome.
How did I inspire you to write this one?

[MandaBear]

Your picture :) and I was listening to ABBA at the same time and the poem was born.

[ron]

-blushing- aww I am honored Manda.
I like ABBA

[MandaBear]

ABBA is Awesome! My favorite song is Dancing Queen

[ron]

I love that one to. I use to listen to it at this small sandwich shop that served beer on base.

[MandaBear]

Cool :) I like a lot of the older stuff but also a lot of the new stuff too as far as music goes

[ron]

Im the same way.

[I am renee]

I love this

[MandaBear]

Thank you very much