Blow my candle out

Blow my candle out

A Poem by MandaBear
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Sometimes.....people feel like this

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It's about time to blow the candle out 
No more light just pure darkness 
The ray of happy drowned in sorrow 
I shall not be a burden anymore 

Leaving you with what's left of my love 
Giving up my soul for emptiness 
Looking at the mirror reflecting lackluster skin 
The vacant slot of my existence

Like a whisper in the wind 
I shall float away 
Like the shadows in the dark 
I shall blend into my surroundings 

It's about time to blow the candle out 
No more light just pure darkness 
Shall not be a burden anymore 
I shall be out of your way forever 

Like the snowflake of the winters snow 
I shall melt into the ground 
Like a freshly lit birthday candle 
I shall blow my candle out  





© 2013 MandaBear


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"Leaving you with what's left of my love
Giving up my soul for emptiness "
I like the honest and direct words in the poem. I like the use of the candle to make your point. The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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