When You Happened
A Poem by MandaBear
 For a special guy (who may never read it) Starting with the letter J *wink* 
When You happened........ The Earth stopped spinning The clouds started dancing The sky turned enchanting colors Filling eyes with wonder and excitement Each color made me feel apart of you One for your melting touch One for your intoxicating fragrance One for your hypnotizing passion One for your mesmerizing allure One for your enchanting sensation Oh, the colors....wild colors..... your colors You are the rose of my garden The sun in my sky The blood flowing in my heart You're woven into my dreams You have left an imprint in me Of fabulous shades and patterns Crops of colors in my heart Where my love will grow Imprinted on my heart with the finest ink The date, The time, The very moment When YOU happened.... To ME
© 2015 MandaBear
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If I didn't know better, Amanda, I would think you are in L♥VE. And - that's fine. Head over heels, heart in the clouds, spirits lifted, and hopes raised. Just come down to Earth and take a breath every now and again is all I ask. :)
Nicely written, though most hearts in the throngs of happiness are often the ones that yield the minds' most creative and inspirational writing as well.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Beautiful. Enchanting and sweet. Excellent write!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Oh my gosh! Freaking cutest thing ever!! < 3 Love it!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Dizzying, sort of like love, you did it up good Amanda....nice one!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
My pleasure, you're welcome!
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Well you damn well explained love quite well here in a rather unique way well done :) Haha you have an obsession for Mr Johnny Depp? I don't quite get what girls like about him, he's a rather average looking guy, it's the fame which adds this attractive tinge to him. But then again ins't that the same for all celebrities, the fame adds this attractiveness we wouldn't usually see
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Lol Okay you found me out I might have a SLIGHT obsession with him. I think its because he looks so .. read moreLol Okay you found me out I might have a SLIGHT obsession with him. I think its because he looks so average joe and he just doesn't conform to the "mold" of Hollywood. And he's really cute lol
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11 Years Ago
I guess so, I don't understand the celebrity obsession thing I don't think any single celebrity look.. read moreI guess so, I don't understand the celebrity obsession thing I don't think any single celebrity looks that attractive. They're all fake anyway so they ain't worth really falling for really, but that's just my opinion
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11 Years Ago
To each their own I suppose. I am glad you liked the poem though =)
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11 Years Ago
Oh loved the poem :) Hehe I just don't get the celebrity obsession, but then again I'd never date on.. read moreOh loved the poem :) Hehe I just don't get the celebrity obsession, but then again I'd never date one if I had the chance
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11 Years Ago
I don't really need to date him either considering he is as long as my father but I guess you couldn.. read moreI don't really need to date him either considering he is as long as my father but I guess you couldn't compare it to like book characters or game character they aren't even real and people go crazy over them. I guess anyway lol. Besides I am looking for some one closer to my age to be with and obsess over lol
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11 Years Ago
Haha well that's a good way to look at it. No offence but the media is very corruptive and younger g.. read moreHaha well that's a good way to look at it. No offence but the media is very corruptive and younger girls get affected so badly by it, they take the ideals from celebrities like Johnny Depp and expect the man they date to be exactly like them otherwise they aren't worth anything. So it's good that you're not like that :)
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11 Years Ago
=D I try. I hope to find some to obsess over even if they don't look like johnny. Besides its not al.. read more=D I try. I hope to find some to obsess over even if they don't look like johnny. Besides its not all about looks either. Kind of like Beast in Beauty and the Beast I want to fall for the heart inside the body of the creature so to speak
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Awwwww my girlie is in lurrrrve, hehee. This is such a sweet, loving poem. I'm sure if your mystery guy ever reads it he will love it -wink, wink, nudge, nudge- ;-P Lovely Am!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks! It just might even be johnny depp *wink, wink, lol*
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11 Years Ago
Ahahaha, you crazy gal, how I missed you when you left me here all alone! ;p
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11 Years Ago
Lol I missed you too! I thought about you guys so much! I miss you every time you leave. btw I might.. read moreLol I missed you too! I thought about you guys so much! I miss you every time you leave. btw I might have a slight obsession with Johnny Depp but only slight lol
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11 Years Ago
Aha, I miss you, too girlie x Ahhh, this I know. I have our trip all planned out, down to the 't' ;-.. read moreAha, I miss you, too girlie x Ahhh, this I know. I have our trip all planned out, down to the 't' ;-) You my friend, shall meet your love!
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11 Years Ago
Yay! I just have one request though!
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11 Years Ago
Uh oh, yes you and Johnny can have your own room...... ;-) What?
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11 Years Ago
Lol I want you to come so you can take pictures because I will be staring at him so much I will forg.. read moreLol I want you to come so you can take pictures because I will be staring at him so much I will forget to! lol
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11 Years Ago
Haha, I'm coming, too chicka! Wouldn't miss it, LOL.
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11 Years Ago
Awesome you might have to hold me back some because I might get a little crazy lol I hope if I ever .. read moreAwesome you might have to hold me back some because I might get a little crazy lol I hope if I ever did meet him he would be nice you know that would just ruin it if he was a jerk you know
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11 Years Ago
I think he would be nice, 'specially if he met his number 1 fan. Ya know, might take you out to dinn.. read moreI think he would be nice, 'specially if he met his number 1 fan. Ya know, might take you out to dinner and all, snap piccies. :P Marry you, too.
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11 Years Ago
Lol I hope so lol I would love to be paid just to stare at him lol
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11 Years Ago
Hahahahahaha, you make me laugh so much!
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11 Years Ago
Well you'll be staying at his house.....
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11 Years Ago
Lol I will never leave!!!!!
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11 Years Ago
https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=johnny+depps+house&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab.. read morehttps://www.google.co.uk/search?q=johnny+depps+house&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=w4b9UfzkAcaQ4ASwz4HgCA&biw=1366&bih=667&sei=x4b9UcOnAs2Q0QWHkYH4Cw#um=1&hl=en&tbm=isch&q=johnny+depp's+house&spell=1&sa=X&ei=x4b9UdfyB6Xs0gWGw4HgCg&ved=0CFEQBSgA&bav=on.2,or.r_qf.&bvm=bv.50165853%2Cd.d2k%2Cpv.xjs.s.en_US.seW1cfrvSKg.O&fp=cda80eecb45d04c5&biw=1366&bih=667&facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=GVv2bBCLL6TRGM%3A%3Bdhv9ZdIXH7ZH3M%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.instablogsimages.com%252F1%252F2011%252F12%252F02%252F132280330150.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.bornrich.com%252Fjohnny-depp.html%3B594%3B477
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11 Years Ago
LMAO! I didn't think so!
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11 Years Ago
I am really never leaving now!
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11 Years Ago
HAHAHAHAAHA =d You have me in hysterics here, love - I know you won't. I'll drag you though.
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11 Years Ago
Okay lets go now!! lol
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11 Years Ago
You know me so well!
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11 Years Ago
We are going closer to xmas!
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11 Years Ago
Ahahaa, yes I do!
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11 Years Ago
Lol yeah Christmas present to end all Christmas presents!! Best day ever!
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11 Years Ago
=D right back at you =P
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11 Years Ago
Hahahaah! So glad you're back girlie!
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11 Years Ago
Me 2. I watched a new movie yesterday
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11 Years Ago
Magic Mike.........Omg is all I have say
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11 Years Ago
OMG! You watched that?!
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11 Years Ago
Yes I did I wanted to see what it was all about. Pretty much the best parts where Channing Tatum *yu.. read moreYes I did I wanted to see what it was all about. Pretty much the best parts where Channing Tatum *yummy*
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11 Years Ago
Yeah, lol. me no like him....
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11 Years Ago
Why not just curious lol I am glad you liked the poem by the way =P
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11 Years Ago
I'm just not, I don't see what's the big deal, lol. I mean they're celebs that I like....
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11 Years Ago
Okay I was just wondering to each her own I suppose lol Johnny still is my number one lol
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11 Years Ago
http://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/736x/51/6c/4d/516c4d48b289b94eeee20b9bf33995e4.jpg
If.. read morehttp://media-cache-ec0.pinimg.com/736x/51/6c/4d/516c4d48b289b94eeee20b9bf33995e4.jpg
If you know what I mean *wink, wink*
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11 Years Ago
Bahahahahahahahaahahahaha! =D Girl! You are such a devil!
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11 Years Ago
Lol I thought you might like that joke lol I guess to who ever I get with needs to watch out lol
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11 Years Ago
Hahaha, I'll warn them in advance!
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11 Years Ago
I think you should lol
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11 Years Ago
Lol I like talking to you did you know that??
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11 Years Ago
Lno I did not. Hahaha.
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11 Years Ago
Yes, in fact I really do like it =)
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11 Years Ago
Aha, I like talking to you, too
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11 Years Ago
=P best friends forever!
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11 Years Ago
Yay! For sure!
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11 Years Ago
Yay! I must say you are the coolest =) I can't wait for christmas *wink wink*
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11 Years Ago
Hahahaah, wooooooo!
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11 Years Ago
Were you just born cool or did you learn it somewhere? I want to know =)
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11 Years Ago
Aha, I was born cool. ;-P Nice piccie!
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11 Years Ago
Thanks! =) Can you teach me how to be cool because I am surely not lol
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11 Years Ago
Yah you are! You just don't know it. I ain't cool, gurl, I am weird! Ask Frieda!
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11 Years Ago
Lol well I think you are the coolest!! I want to write another Disney song which one should I do?
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11 Years Ago
Ha, yaay, thanks! And erm...... Snow white!
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11 Years Ago
Don't maybe I was never much a fan of snow white. what about you? did you like snow white?
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11 Years Ago
Yes I did, the little dwarfs were so cute, I loved grumpy and sleepy, they're my bros. :P
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11 Years Ago
lol =) My favorite was Little Mermaid. Flounder was my bro :P
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11 Years Ago
Ahaha, nice one! ;-)
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11 Years Ago
Of course Pirates of the Caribbean is and will always be my fave :P
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11 Years Ago
Hahaaha of course!
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11 Years Ago
I cant imagine why!!
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11 Years Ago
Pffft me either :p
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11 Years Ago
Lol =) He's my creme dela creme a la edgar! lol
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11 Years Ago
Hahahahahahhaa! Nice.
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11 Years Ago
Lol What can I say. I hope to meet a guy with the same quality! lol
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Added on August 3, 2013
Last Updated on March 8, 2015
Tags: love, romance, heart, poem
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