I hate you

I hate you

A Poem by MandaBear
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Angry much? Let me know what you think

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Do you think I am just your play thing?
You think you can just toss me away when your done
Well, I am here to tell you that your wrong
I am not just something you can take advantage of 

Don't toy with my emotions 
Don't think you can get away with that 
I will not bow down to your every will 
You got another thing coming 

I hate what I've become 
I hate what I've done
I hate what you have done to me 
I hate you 

The last thing you will remember is your heart being taken out
Just as you took my heart away.
Ripped it out of my soul 
Threw it away as thought it didn't matter

Now tell me lover was it worth it?
Was it worth destroying my innocence?
My love didn't seem to matter 
Now I am filled with nothing but hate

 I hate what I've become 
I hate what I've done
I hate what you have done to me 
I hate you 

© 2013 MandaBear


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Wow! This is absolutely incredible! Love this so much!! Great writing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very strong of you Amanda, however do not expect that turning your love to hate will remove someone from your life anymore than handing them a bunch of flowers will. There is still a lot of raw anger here, and good for you girl getting it out, just be careful not to let it consume you. Good write, keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


Strong, powerful,full of emotions and most of all hatred..........I can understand this poem well enough due to personal reasons........great job done AMANDA! Loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A powerful and honest feel to the poem. Anger can send us to dark and scary places. When someone twist us up and leave us to swim in sadness. Sometime hate give us some sort of peace. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


So much hatred about a mean person,
emotions just outraged ..I could feel actually that..
Great poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


It sounds like he wanted the trial without having to pay for the full version. The next time you put yourself in display the best thing to do is ask them if they have a debit card and once they spend what you want them to maybe then you could give them a little scoop to taste at a time.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Hate, the very word conjures up scenes of vengeance and revenge - definitely notta healthy emotion. Hate is not the opposite of love as many people seem to believe. The opposite of love is apathy. The opposite of hate is encouragement I have found in many cases. That's why it is such a destructive element.


Posted 11 Years Ago



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