Many moons

A girl loves this boy and he loves her but this is how she is feeling...... Enjoy!

Many moons ago you stole my heart 

It's as if we are drifting apart 

Like waves the from the ocean 

We roll in and slide back 

Our souls were once connected 

Our desires played off each others 

We wanted our bodies to become one 

Love seemed so much easier then 

The sweet little messages we would send

How much you wanted me by your side

How much I wanted to be by your side

Our lust was forever growing for each other

Many moons ago you stole my heart 

Your words would flow through my heart 

They meant something special to me 

Now your words are few and far between 

Will we ever get back to where we were?

My feelings for you haven't changed 

Strong and stronger every day 

I just hope you feel the same way

Maybe I am over thinking this 

Maybe my heart wants to think this 

Just know dear I love you 

I wish there was a way to show you 

Many moons ago you stole my heart

Many moons ago I gave you the key 

This moon I give you my soul 

This moon I give you my all 

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Gosh!! Love this poem so much!! It can relate to it so well!

[Missy Moooooo]

This is a great way to help your friend, I mean it helps a lot of people understand that some people drift apart. And it's those strong enough to be brought back together. Awesome write. :)

[dw817]

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That's a very pretty Icon you have there, Amanda. Suggest you add that full-size (up to 500-pixels across you remember) at the top.

Let's see now. This is DEFINITELY about ԼƠƔЄ I can see that. I tell ya what, if this guy stole your heart AND your key, I think you have some payment coming back. So the next time you see him he should totally GLOMP you with a wonderful kiss ! ^.^

[s y e]

Awwww, this is the sweetest thing ever, I loved your title, too. You've done an awesome job here, Am!

Btw, I got us tickets to go see Johnny! :D

~ Noodle.

[BlueDreams]

Very nice flow of words, just wow..
I could feel all tastes here like sadness,romance,and desire to unite with your love..
Splendid :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Outstanding. Amazing play on the emotions! :')

100/100

[Tiffany S]

Gorgeous. Seriously, I love the imagery of "many moons." It sounds so much better than "many days." The last stanza is my personal favorite :)