Too bad it's only a dream

Just ..a...Dream....... I hope you enjoy!

Your lips are memorizing

Your touch is just right 

Your heart is pure 

Too bad it's only a dream 

Figment of my innocent imagination 

Want you to be what you're not 

Be all that you can be 

Too bad it's only a dream 

Just a shadow in the dark 

A beautiful disaster 

Falling for you faster 

Too bad it's only a dream 

 My heart cries out to you 

My soul needs to be complete 

I need someone to calm my tears 

Too bad it's only a dream 

So far away from me 

I want you to be my lover and best friend 

Hold me until the end of time 

Too bad it's only a dream 

A shadow in the dark 

A whisper in the wind 

Everything isn't what it seems  

Too bad it's only a dream 

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Gosh it's like you know exactly what I'm thinking! Love this so much! :)

[Tiffany S]

Beautiful write! :) It's basically my life, I can totally relate to this one.

[sparkle]

a very very good work , I really like it , the repetition of the last line in every stanza seems nice too , I did the same thing in one of my songs .. and the last stanza is the best one (( A shadow in the dark
A whisper in the wind
Everything isn't what it seems
Too bad its only a dream ))
well done ..

[Felicity's Eve]

The repetition of 'Too bad it's only a dream' ('its' should be 'it's', by the way) adds a wonderful emphasis to this amazing poem. Love it. Oh, and 'your' should be 'you're' in stanza 2. :)

Keep up the great work ;)

100/100

[MandaBear]

Thank you I will go and fix that :)

[Felicity's Eve]

My pleasure :)

[dw817]

Ah Amanda, but many things in this great Sapphire World of ours are constructed from what dreams are. Ideas, concepts, revolutions in technology, and brilliance that goes beyond paper.

There are a great many things in this world we would not have today were it for the almighty dreamers and their dreams ...