Surrendering Love

A Poem by MandaBear

Just something I came up with after listening to a love song. I hope you enjoy!

I wish I could show you how much I love you.

Knowing your so far away hurts me so.

My love for you is deeper than any ocean.

Higher than any mountain.

Even with 7 billion people on this earth I choose you.

You make me smile every time I look at you.

Oh, how I wish I could give you a kiss.

To be in your arms to feel safe.

My tears run down my face.

Knowing you are not within reach.

I wish upon a star to have you with me.

Even trying Santa to put you under the Christmas tree.

I can write and write about how much you mean to me.

There are not enough words.

Not enough pages in the world to write on.

You are my twin flame.

You make my butterflies fly in the wind.

You make my heart swoon every time you say hello.

I will never break your heart.

For I would die if I did.

I know I have a hard time expressing my feelings.

My heart truly belongs to you.

My soul is within your body.

You are truly my other half.

Those words you always wanted to hear

I can say to you

Baby,

I love you.

© 2013 MandaBear

Author's Note

In case you didn't know what a Twin Flame is= Twin Flame- A soulmate or soul mate is a person with whom one has a feeling of deep and natural affinity, love, intimacy, sexuality, spirituality.

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Ohhhwillow

Firstly, great picture, immediately I was drawn to this piece! For me, your beginning does not compliment the density of your thoughts, your line
"There are not enough words.
Not enough pages in the world to write on" however, I found most pleasing Amanda!
It is true - there will never be enough words to depict the drawing of a hearts dear longing.

This reflected your grasp of modern music, almost echoing it's ritualistic sounds. It would have been nice to read of your own feelings about love, not just spurred on by music, though I always appreciate your smooth flow and graceful rhythm.

Keep going Hun, I'd love to see your strong ideas shine on the page :)