Our everlasting love

I have been working on this for over a month I think I got it. Enjoy!

Those piercing eyes looking at me with a greater intent.

Lustily calling out my name with silence.

Your body covered in beads of sweat just waiting to fall.

Calling out just wanting to be touched.

As the water dripped from your muscles the heat became more intense.

Passions were burning like the pits of fire on a cold winters night.

Glances were exchanged with a quick fluttering of the eyes.

My heart couldn't take it anymore, I wanted you right then.

You walked toward me with the sun illuminating your every curve.

Just laying a kiss upon my lips ever so gently.

Your warmth radiates through our bodies.

Our love forever intertwined in that moment.

 Our lips parted with only a gasp of air breaking the silence.

No words were uttered for eyes seemed to say it all.

The lust and the passion took over as the suns illumination faded into the distance.

Like moths to a flame the love we had burned brightly into the night.

Our everlasting love floats into the wind as the fire burns its brightest flame.

Forever two soul intertwine in silence and peace.

Reviews

[jennifer little]

great poem i loved it wonderful work

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

great imagery here...loved it

[s y e]

OMG! WOW! This was amazing, it was really well written! I love how the passion was brought to life!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the amazing poetry. No weakness in the poem. I like the flow of thoughts and the good description. I like the way you brought desire and passion to life. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much! =)