First crush

First crush

A Poem by MandaBear
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About first crush I had.

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You were my first friend, love and first crush.
The first to steal my heart.
You were the one that googly eyes were made for.
You cast a spell on me.

I got up the courage to finally tell you how I felt.
After years of not telling you.
I finally told you that I liked you.
You said you already knew.

I couldn't believe you already knew.
Why didn't you say anything?
I can't help if I wore my heart on my sleeves.
I guess I was easier to read then I thought.

You were my first friend, love and first crush.
The apple of my eye.
My whole world of my younger years.
My diary was filled with your name.

I think of you from time to time.
I sometimes wonder what life would have been.
Why dwell in the what if's when you can look at what is to come.
Even if we didn't work out we are still friends.

You will always be in heart.
I will remember what could have been.
If there's one memory I don't want to lose is;
That you were my first crush.

© 2013 MandaBear


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romantic

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thats such a beautiful composition Amanda :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Thank you! =)
Ah...indeed the first love is a memory to retain forever....somewhere in our internal "filing Cabinets" for a rainy day.....this is emotion packed and heartfelt, and for that, I enjoyed it...:)
BB

Posted 11 Years Ago


A sweet lovely poem... An enjoyable read...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Most people can remember their first true love/crush. I know I can!
You did a great job portraying your emotions and feelings within this piece. Well done Amanda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Defffffffinitely can relate to this one! Considering my first crush was on a boy in preschool that I then liked for 10 years :P hahaha

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can totally relate to this poem! What I love about it is the feeling of hope, that even though one love didn't work out, there is positivity that one will in the future! And that the positive memories are still there :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I've never had my first crush yet...but I enjoy your poem's bittersweet ending.

Posted 11 Years Ago


When we live we experience and only when we experience do we truly live. Cool stuff Amanda :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


rarely do ex-lovers ever make good friends but good friend often make for great lovers. this is a wonderful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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