Would you be my super hero?

Would you be my super hero?

A Poem by MandaBear
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Inspired by a Nickelback song.

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I need a superhero.
I need someone to save me from this.
Every sinner needs a savoir 
Am I the villain your willing to save?

There are things about me you should know.
I am scared and I wonder why.
All I really want is someone to hold tight.
Would you be my superhero?

I don't care if you don't have wings to fly.
I don't care if you cant leap a tall building with one leap.
I need someone to catch my tears when they fall.
Someone to know what I am thinking without reading my mind.

I need a superhero.
I need someone to take me out of the dark.
Every angel needs a savoir.
Am I the angel your willing to save?

I don't have any special powers.
I can't fly nor can I leap from buildings.
Everyone needs a savior.
Would you be my superhero?

© 2013 MandaBear


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This was very cute :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is really good. Everyone needs somebody sometime to catch them when they fall.


Posted 11 Years Ago


This was fun to read. Thanks for the share!

Posted 11 Years Ago


that is cool :) a very interesting theme, something highly relatable for many people :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww! Such a cute poem!! Really great!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Loved this Amanda! I think all of us in some way or another ask these questions.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MandaBear

11 Years Ago

=) thanks
Not a Nickleback fan in the slightest, however this is a nice poem. It feels real, there is no falsification of thought, I like that

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MandaBear

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review =)
"Am I the angel your willing to save"

I adore this line- it adds a sweet touch to this piece of work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Really like this poem! Like the questions at the end of stanza's 1 and 2 , 4 and 5. Also I like this "Every sinner needs a savoir Am I the villain your willing to save?" Good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 29, 2013
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