Good-bye

I saw someone else's goodbye poem and I thought i would write one. Let me know what you think!

Would you miss me if I was gone?

Would you care how I went?

This may be the last time I see you.

This is goodbye.

I will swing by a rope, finally finishing me off.

Pills will already be taking over my body.

Blood will be falling from the cuts on my arms.

The last breath will be taken as I am left to swing.

A note will be left for you to read,to understand why.

I doubt you will read it though.

I know you won't understand.

I wish it didn't have to be this way.

This is goodbye, the last curtain call.

You had your chance to change my fate.

You chose to ignore my cries for help.

You left me in the dark with no way to get back to the light.

I took this life because you sucked out my soul.

I was empty and cold.

I gave you everything and got stomped on.

I had no choice but to say goodbye.

The pill I took all had their purpose.

One was for being alone.

One was for falling in love.

The rest was for you.

The cuts I made were to let out all the hate.

I was letting out all the hurt.

My feelings were flowing out of those veins.

They finally let me breath.

I hope you can move on knowing I am in a better place.

I took this body and gave it a life.

I looked death in the face and followed.

This is goodbye my love.

This is goodbye

Author's Note

I kinda felt a little dark so I decided to write this.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

It's not quite as dark as a goodbye of this type usually is. That said, it was well-written. Thank you for sharing.

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!!! Amazing poem! Super sad!!!

[Ahmad Cox]

Very honest and and painful write. Its something that is a hard topic for a lot of people to deal with. I know I have lost my fair share of friends to suicide and depression as well and I know ultimately it just ends up leaving the people left behind more confused and hurt more than anything else.

[Coyote Poetry]

I tell people. Suicide isn't peace. Do you know where you will end up? A sad poem. Many people get lost and confuse. Believe death is peace. I don't know. I do know suicide leave a lot of sad people with questions never to be answered. Thank you for sharing the thought provoking poetry.
Coyote

[Melody Telleria]

Wow, so hard and dark. I hope to never come across someone's goodbye note...that would definitely haunt me. Theres a lot of raw emotion and pain in it. Which is really cool because of the fact that you are just making this up, you know? Very interesting.

[Felicity's Eve]

You kinda felt dark so you wrote this? I get that :3

Very nicely written. So heartbreaking as well. I loved it!