Just a little to late

Just something I made up watching youtube videos

I tried to put it behind me 

Those times you beat me down

I try to forget those horrible names you called me

Those times you looked at me with no emotion

I'm barely hanging on.

One more hit and I am dead.

I can't cry on the outside anymore.

Can't deny it, I can't pretend.

Beaten down, broken and used

Left for dead by an unforgiving soul.

You know it doesn't matter anyway

It's to late to fix it.

You sold me for your own gain.

Acted like I was a waste of time.

You can't wait until I am gone. 

You kept me on a string.

Now I am on the bottom of the barrel

I'm almost out of breath

You kick me while I am down

You strike the fatal blow

I can't cry on the inside anymore

Can't deny it, I can't pretend.

Beaten down, broken and used

No, I am dead. 

Reviews

[Dove]

I have nothing to say but AMAZING!!! Great job.

[MandaBear]

Thank you!

[Dove]

You are so welcome

[Phillitup]

I feel like this has the potential to become a hit song. The beginning holds that air and ring in your mind as you read the words. Man, this would be great with a melody. That is probably what is racing through the mind of every reader. And if they don't like this poem, don't listen to them. This is nicely, eloquently, and deeply penned my poetic friend!
Best regards,
Dell

[MandaBear]

Thank you!

[Westminster Abbey]

Hm, sounds like Kelly Clarkson's "Behind These Hazel Eyes." I love that song! And I love this poem! 100/100

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Absolutely amazing!! It completely expresses how I'm feeling these day!! Great job!! :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Wow. This is fantastic!!! :D