Deadly Woman

Based of the show. You can really get some good idea's off those crime shows lol Hope you enjoy

She seemed to be a sweet and loving person.

She knows how to push all the right buttons. 

Little do you know she is a heartless, selfish, evil woman.

She has no regard for your life at all.

She is watching your back so very close.

This deadly woman is after nothing more than your money.

She doesn't love nor care about you.

Faking feelings is her perfected art form.

Calm and cool is not what the scene had shown.

Nothing was going to stop her from getting what she wants.

This deadly woman has shot you in cold blood.

Bang, bang, bang... You're dead.

This deadly woman makes a quick escape.

Smiling as she walks away.

She's going to collect her dues.

All the while not thinking about you.

No remorse, Not even a care in the world. 

Your soul is gone forever.

 She may be the unlikely gunman but,

She truly is a deadly woman.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

Very striking! Your style is more and more developed with all of your different pieces.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

The world really is cruel, I believe that there are many people like this.. Caring more about money than people's lives... Beautiful write.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, we do live in a cruel world don't we? Yes, it's true that people are like this to others. It's sad to know it's true too. There are women out there, or vice versa, out for someone's money. They'll lust and love all over them until they get what they want and is entirely satisfied. It's a such and sick way to handle business. I think love should be fragile and meaningful, not something we decide to do since we're bored and want to have fun. I also believe since they want and desire for some money in their pockets, how come they go out and make something of themselves? Or wait...is that too much for them? I forgot, people like that forgets that you can't be a slumbag and be so lazy to earn your money. I love how you presented a poem based upon a show even though it can happen on a regular basis too. The poor fellow in this got screwed no matter what. He was lied to, and all of his money gone, and in the end plus he's a dead man. Man! A deadly woman is what she is for sure and so the title goes along with it quite well. :) Excellent!

A few misspellings I saw, so is it alright to point them out to you Amanda?

The first line in stanza three--I'm debating whether or not the word "showed" should be *shown.
Last line in stanza three-Band, bang, bang.....*You're dead*

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Hatchling]

Very Good

[Krista Weiss]

Really cool! Great poem!!

[MandaBear]

Thank you!