Somewhere over the Rainbow

This is my cover of this song. It would be helpful to think of the song while reading this! I hope you like it.

Somewhere over the rainbow, where you are

There's a dream that I dreamt of once in a lullaby.

Somewhere over the rainbow, I like you

And the dream that I dared to dream,

Must come true.

One day I hope you won't be far

And find your heart not far behind me.

Where your singing melts this girl's heart 

High above the mountain tops

That's where you'll see me.

Somewhere over the rainbow, my dreams fly

 Dreams sorrow over the rainbow

Why,then oh why can't I?

If I could be happy flying beyond the rainbow

Why, Oh why can't I?

Somewhere over the rainbow, there you are

In the dream that I dared to dream once in lullaby.

Somewhere over the rainbow, I love you

And the dream that I dared to dream 

Really did come true

One day I won't be far

And finally my love has found me

Where your singing melts my warm heart

High above the chimney tops

That's where you found me

Somewhere over the rainbow, my dreams fly

If dreams can fly over the rainbow

Why, then, oh why can't I?

If happiness lies beyond the rainbow 

Why, oh why can't I? 

Reviews

[once upon a time]

I think it's really nice that you made your own version of a classic song. This is really sweet. I can definitely see the original song in it but it's got your own personal touch in it.

[chris+y]

this cant be seriousl

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

This is such a pretty poem, I love it(: you did a great job with this, and it reminded me of the song, but you also put your own spin on it; I really like that! Beautiful write.

[dan nacario]

Captivating ...

[Morrigan Nicole]

oh my goodness! this was absolutely and truley fantstic. amazing, beautiful, inspiring. such emotion you put into this, to capture that feeling of longing, and hoping. desperateness even. it was written in such a peaceful melodical way, it captured my intrest in a very rare sense. i absolutely love this, and just must favorite it!

[Susan]

Amazing! well done...I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing. Like others have mentioned, the question at the end make the reader think and question

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. The repetition made the poem stronger. I like the wish in the poem. I like the question at the end of the poem. Made the reader think and question. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Erinne S.]

I loved this piece! Well done!

100/100

~Erinne

[Krista Weiss]

Really cute!! I love it! :)