Dream A little Dream

Something i wrote while i was waiting to clock into work .Hope you enjoy!

I dream of you yet, I dont like you. 

I dream of us sharing a kiss,

A wonderful moment of pure bliss.

I dont even like you; So why am I dreaming of you?

Your were mean to me yet, you are on my mind.

Is it some hidden reality that I wish to come true?

Is it some unresolved feelings I have?

What is bringing the desire to dream of you?

A sweet and gentle moment with you brings fireworks.

Wanting to hold you with a tenderness yet felt. 

Biting at the chance to reunite with a lost love perhaps?

A love that was just one love.

Yet truly I have no feelings for you.

Nothing can point me in any direction toward affection.

I am slave to a large space lighting up with love.

What powers are at work trying to get us together?

My feelings for you are unchanged. 

Yet deep down; Do I truly feel those feelings?

Are they suppressed for deeper meaning?

Like lack of love is overcompensating and trying to find love;

For an otherwise loveless life?

Oh, only my dreams will tell.

Until tonight my unrequited love whoever you may be. 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Lacha Young]

i really enjoyed this.

[Lacha Young]

Im deep into this. im into this situation right now, and i wanna know if otherwise loveless life too

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

really serene and pleasant work...i like this a lot

[V.J.C.]

Yes, the concept is a thoughtful one...

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Interesting concept! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this well-written poem. Great work.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Amanda, bravo! This is quite wonderful and well-written indeed. I can totally relate since there's been times when I daydream or have dreams about a guy I don't even like. Actually, there's a guy in my grade named Andrew that I've been going to school with since the 6th grade but this year I've discovered a possible crush I developed. But at some points I keep saying "I don't like him." Then a moment later I imagine us together. So, yeah I can totally relate to this poem right here. The only mistake that I found was "Your were mean to me yet, you are on my mind"
should be *You were mean to me, yet you are on my mind* I THINK (not for sure) that the "yet" sounds better behind the comma. You don't have to change it if you don't want to. Anyways, great job! :D

Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Really good job! I love it!

[Starr Mist]

I love this so much! It's true! This is almost like in the "Mortal Instruments" series and it's like Jace and Clary.

Very good!

[Coyote Poetry]

Unrequited love leave us wondering and wishing. I like the thoughts and the desire in the poem. Mystery allowed to ponder nice dreams and thoughts. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Jessica Samuelsen]

a fine line of love and hate good job lovely