Wrong

If i had a crush and had the courage to say it this is what i would say.

Is it wrong to want you the way I do?

I dont know you yet I want all of you

Everything about you turns me on

Is it wrong to feel this way?

I often dream of your muscles

Of the way your body would feel against mine

Of your voice saying " Good morning"

Just knowing your there to protect me 

What your lips feel like in morning and at night

The touch of your hand brushing a hair from my face

The way you laugh at the silliest of things

The way you look when your trying to be macho man.

Is it wrong to want you the way I do?

I dont know you yet I want all of you

Everything about you turns me on

Is it wrong to feel this way?

You probably think i am weird; strange even.

Knowing so little and wanting so much,

You make my world so bright

Just thinking about you makes me smile

I dont know maybe i am crazy 

Dreaming of something that may never happen

I just wish i didn't wear my heart on my sleeves

Then I wouldnt get hurt as much as I do.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The dreams and the fantasy is the first step in the desire of love. Dreams and imagination make our mind and body wish for people who make us crazy. I like the thoughts and the strong ending. Half of the emotion of love is the mind needed more and create hope. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Jordan Easley]

Nice idea. There are a few grammatical errors that you should look at. I liked the repetition of the stanzas. Nicely structured. It has a lot of mature concepts. Nicely written.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I know how the feels. Excellent poem.