Wrong

If i had a crush and had the courage to say it this is what i would say.

Is it wrong to want you the way I do?

I dont know you yet I want all of you

Everything about you turns me on

Is it wrong to feel this way?

I often dream of your muscles

Of the way your body would feel against mine

Of your voice saying " Good morning"

Just knowing your there to protect me 

What your lips feel like in morning and at night

The touch of your hand brushing a hair from my face

The way you laugh at the silliest of things

The way you look when your trying to be macho man.

Is it wrong to want you the way I do?

I dont know you yet I want all of you

Everything about you turns me on

Is it wrong to feel this way?

You probably think i am weird; strange even.

Knowing so little and wanting so much,

You make my world so bright

Just thinking about you makes me smile

I dont know maybe i am crazy 

Dreaming of something that may never happen

I just wish i didn't wear my heart on my sleeves

Then I wouldnt get hurt as much as I do.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Can relate so much to that ! I mean, when I fall in love I become pretty much a boy-version of this poem xD

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I think a lot of people can ask themselves these questions about that certain someone on their mind. I like how it's so relatable to others including myself. Well done :) There are a few misspellings but they're minor.

Mistakes:

(Just knowing your there to protect me) *Just knowing you're there to protect me*
(The way you look when your trying to be macho man) *The way you look when you're trying to be macho man*
* The letter "I" should be capitalzed anytime it's by itself or at the beginning of the sentence.

Ashley Rivers-- Keep writing! :D

[Invisible]

love is never wrong, only lust.

[Bryan Micheni]

this is almost exactly what my girlfriend told me:)

[Starr Mist]

Very good. I love the words "Heart on the sleeve."
I actually used that in my book even before I read this. I was using in a comedic way though.
"It’s all over his face, his heart is on his sleeve, as it were..."

A great write! Thanks for posting!

[sarah]

You know sometimes dreaming of someone is better than not having anyone to dream about, if you guys are meant to be then having your heart on your sleeve isn't a bad thing. Great write!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

very meaningful words!

and this poem was kinda cute too!

[devon]

This was really nice and sweet. :) Great job and great wording!

And I did notice a few grammatical errors, so you might want to go back and edit. Other than that, it was very good!

[Cassie Fraga]

lots of truth in this write... its not easy to build up courage to say these things in person... but you did a great job penning it out!! this is the works of a great writer, when the ink can speak emotions, thoughts, dreams, lessons, experience...((etc.)) out for us, it proves our writing is great!!
GOOD WORK!!

[SeventhSin]

Really outstanding poem! :) Great job!