Gold of Crimson

Gold of Crimson holds everything.

The Gold of Crimson shines-
Shines until we can not live any longer-

If it no longer shines-

We will turn pale-
It will change our endless souls-

We must fight till our last breath-

To keep it shining-
To hold our key to our future glory-
To sew our grounds together-

The Gold of Crimson will always shine-
In favor of our own glory of love, happiness, and life that we must live for-

The Gold of Crimson will shine forever to hold everyone's glory-

Reviews

[Samuel Pennell]

I really like this! It has a classic feel to it.

[Nickalas Cannon]

Thanks. It's actually my very first poem I wrote.

[Samuel Pennell]

Outstanding-keep it up!