Yellow Submarine

Yellow Submarine

A Poem by Nicole

Yawning depths of the ocean it swims.

Everlasting darkeness at the bottem of the sea in a yellow submarine.

Low down where the little fishies swim.

Lifeless coral waving in the waves.

Oceanic creatures lurking in the depths of th sea.

Water everywhere.

 

Subterranean.

Unfathomably deep.

Bottomless holes that never ever end.

Mind boggling beauty.

Abyss.

Racing fish swim by your window.

Invisible plankton roaming around every spot in the ocean.

Nothing but water.

Extremely FUN!!!

 

PS Mia yawing means VERY deep.  THESAURUSES ROCK!!!!

© 2010 Nicole


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Mia
Congrats on placing in the contest Nicole!

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It was very good. Nice job.

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Mia
Sorry, in my last review I meant to say yawning, your P.S distracted me :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Anyways how did u like it?

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I'm not an idiot, I know what yawing means. And your mind should be a theasaurus, not one of the online ones.

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Nicole
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Pewaukee, WI



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