Just Another Girl

Just Another Girl

A Poem by nibhz

I saw her,
And she stared back.
Her face full of expressions,
But smile she did lack.

I smiled a little,
And a little did she smile.
Her eyes hid a story,
May be journey of a mile.

What's your hidden story?
What's that you want?
I gently asked her,
Or is the memories that haunt!

Saw her thinking hard,
I waited for the replies.
After a deep sigh,
The answer was in her eyes.

To all my questions,
Only one answer i could find.
Million thoughts of her dreams,
Kept running through her mind.

Keep trying until you succeed,
I assured her with a smile.
She will fulfill her dreams,
Even if it takes a while.

Who is she?
You might think.
How i understood her,
Within an eye's blink?

She is no one else,
Just another ordinary girl.
A girl in the mirror,
Who wish to change the world.

© 2013 nibhz


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The cadence is rhythmic and easy to follow. Apt surprise at the end. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


nibhz

11 Years Ago

thankyou so much blue! I am glad you liked it! :)
It flows very smoothly and the end comes as a slight surprise as in the beginning you did not lead the reader to believe the narrator is talking to herself.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nibhz

11 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)
Kaitlyn Raiford

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)

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