Begging

Does he love me?

It runs though my mind everyday

 

Does he miss me?

I miss his touch in everyway

 

Tell me you love me.

I can't make him say

 

Do you still want me?

Sometimes I can't tell

 

I remember when everything was about me, about us

But still when we touch its always love never lust

 

Every poem, every line

I can't always say now that your mine

 

I have so much to say to you

But I really dont know what to do

 

Can you tell me you love me?

Can you tell me your dreams about us?

 

Am I still your only one?

Please just tell me you love me.

 

Just tell me one last time

So I can hold on.

 

Reviews

[Erin]

The movement of the poem itself relates incredibly to the color scheme you chose. Well thought out. And it's so depressing. The tone and word choice tells it all. You're really good for thinking of yourself as "not much of a writer."
Give yourself more credit!
PBP

[SimplyDisastrous]

Touching, emotional write. (: