Shoes on the floor

Shoes on the floor

A Story by niadiaz
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   Brown feet, crooked,worn,broken in, shuffling  past the corners. passing the cubbard were  pair  of  stiff red dancing shoes stand errect  poised  to  go  out, on their owhe in  if need be, near the  sink there sits  a turned  over  leather sandal   a sot showing where the big toe  has  worn trough  in  fits of nervous energy somewhere its mate is hiding  smelling of sand and salt  eir is no though though there is no ocean, no sea  for miles.

 

 crooked brown feet , paused by the door near a   pair  of  womens running shoes, one bewilderd silk stocking potruding from the  left shoe. The  feet  pause by the  door the the right  shyly twisting and turning  behind the left, a slight white ring of a tan line  dancing by. The feet turn in  a militant abot face walking twards a  pair  of buttery yellow leather shoes beneath  a bed, these that are rarely worn.... the left  foot  pauses  nudging  one shoe  from the other  seeking, a worn brown  crooked , leather shoe, the other adjoined by the lace, a rather masculine looking  pair save for the size.  The feet  hide whithin the  worn leather shoes and  leave.

© 2011 niadiaz


Author's Note

niadiaz
Ignore the gramatic issues I'm looking for a medication to correct This.

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Added on September 28, 2011
Last Updated on October 18, 2011

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niadiaz
niadiaz

manta, west, Ecuador



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