Became

There is no need for a description in this one

Respect who you love!

 

Because you don’t know how long they will be around.

 

The “I love you’s” and the “you mean the world”

 

The “you make me twirl” the “you make my fly”

 

The “you’re the best guy” the “you’re there for me when I cry”

 

The “you never lie” the “you’re the best” the “closest to my chest”

 

The “only one” the “you’re fun” the “I’ll never leave you”

 

The “you’re so interesting” the “I can’t wait to die old with you”

 

The “we will be in heaven together” the “I miss you”

 

The “you’re so sexy” the “goodnight I love you babe”

 

The “good morning” the “I love your family”

 

The “I love your mom” the “I love your dad”

 

The “I love your little brother”

 

The “I can’t wait to see you”…

 

The “I love you’s” became “I hate you’s”

 

The “you mean the world” became “you’re a piece of s**t”

 

The “you make me twirl” became “you make me sick”

 

The “you make me fly” became “you make me cry”

 

The “You’re the best guy” became “you’re the same”

 

The “you’re there for me when I cry” became “you’re never there for me”

 

The “ you never lie” became “you’re lying”

 

The “you’re the best” became “you’re the worst”

 

 

The “Closest to my chest” became “get off my breast”

 

The “only one” became “I’ll find another”

 

The “you’re fun” became “you’re boring”

 

The “I’ll never leave you” became “I want to breakup”

 

The “you’re so interesting” became “there isn’t anything more to know”

 

The “I cant wait to die old with you” became “I hope you die”

 

The “we will live in heaven together” became “I hope you burn in hell”

 

The “I miss you” became “I’m busy”

 

The “you’re so sexy” became “I’m not in the mood”

 

The “goodnight babe” became “K, night”

 

The “Good morning” became nothing I always text first

 

The “I love your family” became “your piece of s**t family”

 

The “I love your mom” became “she’s a b***h”

 

The “I love your dad” became “he is a piece of s**t and I hope he burns in hell too”

 

The “I love your little brother” became “why can’t he just go away”

 

The “I cant wait to see you” became,

 

“I just want someone else”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This idea hit me like a freight train after I woke up this morning so I had to get it down and here it is. Let me know what you think. I would love to present this to a crowd its is very powerful said aloud.

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

I think this is a powerful and true piece of poetry. I felt it shows two main traits, that love can easily turn into another emotion so intensely the juxtaposition becomes immense, and with regards with the latter half of your poem, I also hate the way the love has been taken out of life and language. An inspired and excellent poem.

[Neythan Cardoso]

It seems to me the more and more I write I get inspired to make more and ore poetry and thank you so much because people like you keep me going! thank you for your review it is much appreciated!

[Mary]

honest writing- it's what happens in a relationship that is not taken care of. Funny, when cars break down, we fix them, we do lots of preventive maintenance so that problems will be minimal. Same goes for lawn mowers, heating systems, etc. It's a damned shame we tend to value our relationships so minimally. We could learn lots from how we care for lawn mowers.

[Neythan Cardoso]

Thank you so much for your review i really appreciate the fact people relating and knowing what these poems are shouting

[Jen Walters]

yes it is though for honesty's sake, I would put a warning on this piece just because of the c-word. I don't want something like this taken down because someone got offended. It's very honest and to the point, something I love about poetry. Good luck presenting this, and thanks for sharing and have a great day.

[Neythan Cardoso]

Thanks because I was wondering about that, thanks for telling me!

[Jen Walters]

You're quite welcome, and have a wonderful day.

[Neythan Cardoso]

and you as well!

[Jen Walters]

please feel free to check out some of my work, I have more to add but am a little busy at the moment.

[Neythan Cardoso]

I definitely will and feel free to do the same!

[Jen Walters]

I will when I can catch up with all of this lol I am a busy person.