Kiss

Have you ever wanted to kiss someone so bad it drives you insane? here it is.

I just want you to kiss me

 

I want to hold your face and bring it into mine

 

I want your hair and my fingers to intertwine

 

I want my lips to mend with yours

 

And for our breathing to move in sync while in galore

 

My hands running ever so slowly all over you body

 

Early on we made this like our hobby

 

When kissing you my body begins to fill with relaxation

 

But at the same time the heat from my love and water from heart creates condensation

 

And which from that we stick together like glue

 

There is no other woman as gorgeous as you

 

Every waking moment I look at you and see

 

That there is that perfect girl for me

 

So please don’t hold yourself back

 

Let your lips touch mine as my world goes black

 

My attraction is like a person to a drug

 

I can’t stop wanting you its infiltrated my mind like a bug

 

You’re just so amazingly beautiful and I can’t comprehend

 

How you make me feel when you give me a kiss and I bend

 

My heart melts and my worries fade and blow into thin air

 

Because I have this beautiful young woman with golden blonde hair

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Rose Olstrom]

It's Good except for the line
"Let your lips touch mine and the feeling hit me like a smack"
This line makes no sense grammatically. also smack is not the most soothing rhyme word to use it disrupts the smoothness of the poem. but besides that I see no flaws

[Neythan Cardoso]

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