My Mind Is A Train

My mind is a train

but I don't know

who the conductor is

 

It is certainly

not me

were it me, I would know

and be more sure

 

My mind is a train

without a stop,

endless and sans fatigue

 

I wish I knew

when my mind would stop

because it doesn't know

where it's going

 

My mind is a train

going and going

and never slowing

Author's Note

I wrote this at about 8:25 pm, october 7... and my mind is going in a million different directions and really it's overwhelming!!

Reviews

[vampireprincess]

its very unique awesome

[Dionysus Cain]

pretty cool, i like the moving of thoughts that have no destination. i feel that way all the time, like damn i over analyze everything and i have questions with no answers and idea's that i forget a second later. i understand this to the t, nice read...