Catch You

Who are you?

Tell me who are you?

I guess it's hard to do

when you don't even know yourself

 

Where are you?

Tell me where are you?

I guess it's hard to do

when you're spinning in circles

 

Catch you by the head

and pick you out from the rest

I wish I could

I know I would

if I knew I could

 

How are you?

Tell me how are you?

I guess it's hard to do

when love is lackin

 

What are you?

Tell me what are you?

It must be hard to do

when first you're a who, now a thing

 

Catch you by the head

and pick you out from the rest

I wish I could

I know I would

if I knew I could

 

Oh I'd catch you by the head

and pick you out from the rest

I wish I could

I know I would

if I knew I could

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Hello Ms. Smith, I read this poem a couple of days ago but had to shut down before I offered a review. This was very well written. I love the flow and the challange of this piece. You are right. Writing is a gift and in this poem you have showcased it very well. I look forward to reading your other material.

[Wildecat]

A beautiful and well written poem, thanks for sharing.

[Broken Warrior]

Beautiful piece, not edited from vision but heart, unique expression, admirable, repetitions very effective. Keep writing

[JRB]

imagery and symbolism nice use of both here,

[kollaboratyve]

This is a very well writen poem. A lot of imagery and symbolism and tone. Good write!!!!! You have a great style of conversating in your work,very inviting.

[Dionysus Cain]

differnet , this is . i like the words, "who" is anyone that is someone.