Goodbye

Farewells on the Mississippi.

A hot Southern day

we drove miles and each other crazy

to get to this point

few words

I look at you then look away

 

I never thought, never thought

saying goodbye would be so hard

I never imagined, never fathomed

this would be so difficult

but what I'll say is

Goodbye

Author's Note

Be as brutally honest as you have to be :)

Reviews

[Dani California]

"we drove miles and each other crazy"

I love that line. lol Truly..
It speaks for itself really, but
it can be interpreted as a little
more if one wants to delve in
between lines...

maybe...

we've been through so much,
come this far, yet we never really
quite clicked --

Goodbyes are never easy, either way.

I enjoyed this :)
Nicely done Haley,
Write on... !