butterflies

butterflies

A Poem by newyearnorma

waiting for your call

my heart beating faster

 

longing to hear your voice

knowing that soon you will be here

 

this is all new, making me nervous

hoping you will like me, knowing i like you

the hope of a new relationship

the butterflies in my stomach

 

so i will wait for your call

my heart beating faster

© 2011 newyearnorma


Author's Note

newyearnorma
very rough i know

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Wonderful write, creative and wonderful

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cute! I like the refrain repeated at the beginning at the end, and I think that short and simple as it is, it portrays the nervousness that every girl or guy feels at the start of a relationship where one side's feelings are already set and the others are unknown. It's very cute, and I can really feel the emotions in this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 6, 2011
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