waiting while dating

i hate this part in dating

do you like me i just cant tell

am i catching your attention, do you find yourself thinking of me at random times in the day

or am i just a way to pass the time

someone to talk to until you find your dream girl

i like you, you make me smile through out my day

so i will wait until you tell me how you feel

and hope one day you call me your girl

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

I hate this part in dating
do you like me?
I just cant tell...

Am I catching your attention?
Do you find yourself thinking of me
at random times in the day?

Or am I just a way to pass the time?

Someone to talk to until you find your dream girl.

I like you, you make me smile through out my day
so i will wait until you tell me how you feel
hoping one day
you call me

your girl.

Just a suggestion as I love the poem, the structure I offer just gives more impact, ignore it as I said only a suggestion.
Sometimes the ones we love don't even know we exist and go from bad romance to bad romance when we are always there offering the stability they need.

Keep em' coming

[Revery]

Again excellent dialog that gives the reader a perspective.