seeking

who will love me now?

I am nothing but a broken shell of a person, i have no faith or trust left to give anyone

but i know i have a lot to offer to the person who will take the time to see it

Who will the man be who sees me for me and says i love you and want you to be mine for all time

Who will take me broken and damaged as i am and say let me help you heal

Who will want me with my past and say left me help you make a better future

Fate your cruelty is legendary but now i ask for some mercy, you have taken a lot from me so now i ask you to send someone to love me

Reviews

[Revery]

We don't know how long it has been since the break up you went through, but it still seems so fresh. Ever hear the expression, take a beat, it from stage performing when the actor takes a moment dramatic pause or to reset and get their bearing. Your writing demonstrates a passionate heart that will be easy for the right man to love, but till he comes into your world take a beat. Out of your writing this is one of the best. Very pure.