Listen

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A Poem by Newsense
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Without giving it away...walks of life.

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Listen

I know that my mind is a complex

Housing the best of the cosmos at forefront

Listen

I know how to spine out a vortex

Simply step in and rewind on the force up

Decisions are more or less yours from the first one

Giving in more is a curse from the first touch

I still don’t believe it at all

Like a first love

Except when I’m leaving I’m gone

Like before 1 reason turned into them all

And the skeptics still clinging to trees as they fall

And I’m out of sight singing I’d feed them to dogs

In between all the seasons, the reasons which fall to believing

That chance when you could of just got what you needed

You thought but not listened

Your heart was not in it; no feelings

Pragmatic in all your divisions

I’m so apathetic and slightly relentless

And I care for this ignorance not

To be ignorant but to be diligent

When all in continuance suddenly

Stops

You should listen to it.

© 2014 Newsense


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I love you sure even paced confident tone that echoes throughout...
.........."When all in continuance suddenly
Stops
You should listen to it."..an almost ominous warning! I will definitely looking up more of your work...well done..

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on June 15, 2014
Last Updated on June 15, 2014
Tags: Spiritual, Death, Inspirational

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Newsense

Bermuda Dunes, CA



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I'm simply a person who loves to write about abstract points and perceptions in life. I love diving into the fabric of reality. I love asking the question "why" and finding that winding path just open.. more..

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