Lovely.
I read your poetry twice a time to understand or study the depths of "White & Black" like what's exactly how it could be interpreted along with your very words... & finally, I got, it's expressing lovers as birds who furrows the skies in a search of their destiny, they walk the "white and black" (means, "peaceful and painful" roads together to meet where their heart residing. It's the nature's game that wherever you move, stride and pace, you find world "multi-passionate" (which means, you already mentioned, "Kaleidoscopic") that shows you the variety of things. It shows you "Marine Algae" which brings peace, but it also shows you the power - one "strength" - of mighty winds that may have force to shatter those everything, the power of waves may destroy/erode seaweeds (that's been white, a once, a long ago but now turns to black) .. & on & on ... Eagle's free bird that soars through the sky (in winds) & indulge "his food" in the brace of shakes, just in few blinks ... so this's nature that sometimes is "White" (peaceful" so sometimes is "Black" (devastating). In the process of that, life's always breathing especially the one that's walked with someone the heart's infatuated with since 'eons. Excellent poetry. Enjoyed reading it. The thing I love 'bout it is the choice of your words which impacting many hearts for sure!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Adam your review is honest, deep and powerful, it really means a lot to me that you enjoy the poetry.. read moreAdam your review is honest, deep and powerful, it really means a lot to me that you enjoy the poetry that is coming from my heart and is a expressionist in form , you took the time to read and understand,gracias amigo!!
I agree with your thoughts and logic in this poem.
"the salty sea,
brings far away worlds,
with a scent of cinnamon,
road and women,"
I believe we are connected. The wind, sea and earth. We all must share. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
American, born in Chile, israelite and with peruvian blood and heart ; Sari was born in Arica, a small village on the border between Chile and Peru, located in the Atacama Desert, on the coast of the.. more..