Blink Of Moment

Feeling that old kiss like it just happened again.

And here we are in the brink again

In this occasion of an opportune black night

I sit in this dark, empty room,

As you occupy my once empty mind.

Thoughts of our past flashing with each blink

of tired, weary eyelids

Begging me for a sleep,

Inching a little bit more closer 

to madness, to insomnia, to a certain Transcendence

where you are right here beside me,

even when you are not Physically.

You talk, you smile, you ask me

"Why do you love me so much?"

While all I want to do is

"Kiss that sweet nectar off your lips"

It courses through my veins to the tips of my fingers

Jolting every little cell of my body from sleep.

Reaching out to you, like iron filings to a magnet.

I stay that way for that infinite moment

Passing away like nothing has happened in reality.

None knowing that I lived an entire lifetime in that blink of moment.

Author's Note

Your feelings are welcome :)

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

Oh, I do love this one!! Such sweet memories that are filled with so much love, passion, and emotions seems to disappear far too quickly. If only we could savor these moments.

This is fantastic, New Theory. Honestly, one of my favorites by you. I could feel your thoughts bleeding the emotions into my soul, as if we were in that same moment.

Fantastic - superb job with this!! xo :)

[New Theory]

Thank you Madalyn, the lover of blue eyes :P

[Madalyn Beck]

Hahaha! Not necessarily! I just like guys with nice eyes. :)

[New Theory]

:P............................................

[Shaquana Adams]

I really loved those last lines! Very impacting sir. Nicely written!
-QuanaWana

[New Theory]

Thank you Shaquana :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww Theory such a wonderful write .A moment can touch us so deeply.Truly great one T :)

[New Theory]

Thank you Vidya, You inspire me always to write better.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome T and thank you I take that as a wonderful compliment :)

[deepika]

very sweet poem, brought a smile to my face.. love the line --- While all I want to do is
"Kiss that sweet nectar off your lips"

[New Theory]

Thank you Deepika, I am humbled, after reading your stories, I have become a fan.

[FateDictates]

spelled out and laid bare so very beautifully...great ink.

[New Theory]

Thank you dear :)

[thedaydreamer]

This is such a good write. Lovely. The flow, the way it progresses to that beautiful ending line, everything seems so unforcedly natural. Good going.

[New Theory]

Thank you DayDreamer. I learn with you. Our sessions help me a lot. Next week, we will do some singing.

[Brokensoul]

ROMANTIC... SIMPLY ROMANTIC (PERIOD)

[New Theory]

Thank you Sonashree :)

[Bluefire]

In the dark, quiet of the night, you begin to remember things as your mind runs as if it were a run away train on a track leading round and round your brain.
I like the sincerity in this and the emotion.
Well done. ^^

[New Theory]

Thank you BlueFire :) I love your reviews :).

[Bluefire]

You're welcome! =3

[Utkarsh Singh]

i think this is ur best poem ......emotions with emotions ....haha .:D best one buddy

[New Theory]

Thank you Utkarsh :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

welcome NT.. :D