Kristina had just returned from her business trip. She was tired and sleepy but first she wanted to see her baby. Swetlana was only seven months old, fast asleep beside her father. Kristina went and lied beside her and the moment she did, Swetlana opened her eyes as if looking at her mother. She closed her eyes thinking it was a dream and a few moments later she opened them again, this time as if confirming that it's not. Kristina lied beside her, seeing the reaction of her baby and knew that her baby also knew she was back, as the sweetest smile now adorned Swetlana's face.
Quick, momentous take on a very cherishing moment. I must say I was expecting a time laps; she wakes up and sees that her baby is now all grown up. I'm glad you kept to the intimate moment expressed here, I believe it works very finely that way. Well done.
Quick, momentous take on a very cherishing moment. I must say I was expecting a time laps; she wakes up and sees that her baby is now all grown up. I'm glad you kept to the intimate moment expressed here, I believe it works very finely that way. Well done.
Sweet, full of love and emotions..
Precise and perfect writing :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much Ayushi :). Is there anything you want me to review, I would like to read your work.. read moreThank you so much Ayushi :). Is there anything you want me to review, I would like to read your work :)
10 Years Ago
You are most welcome..
I would be glad if you'll read my work :)
I am a lazy writer, a day dreamer with lots of ideas which take me to a different land often. I often just jot down ideas which I never really work upon.
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