This broken throne

And until then I sit on this broken throne waiting
For the first drop to fall,and it would start pouring
When men are no more bound by hate and fear
Friends once lost in the distance will all again be near.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Intriguing, I envisioned a crippled kingdom awaiting the chance for redemption and reparation and arising from the crumbles of the past into the future . . . Well done!

[New Theory]

Thanks TR for the awesome review :)

[Tai Ryens]

Aha, please, Tai :3
Always welcome, Theory!

[Bluefire]

"When men are no more bound by hate and fear
Friends once lost in the distance will all again be near."
Short yet powerful. I like it. ^^
Well done!

[New Theory]

Thanks so much Blue... :)

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[Bowers]

a very intriguing piece you've written here, I love how the last line is a different color, perhaps symbolizing the importance of the thought... arent we all waiting for peace? :) This was wonderful!

[New Theory]

All of us are waiting for something, each in our own broken thrones and eventually we will get it.read moreAll of us are waiting for something, each in our own broken thrones and eventually we will get it.
Thanks for the review :)

[Bowers]

yes, you are truly correct!

[New Theory]

...................... :)

[W. C. Forrest]

You have penned your thoughts with precision and clarity. Great work.

[New Theory]

Thank you for the review Eeshan :)

[EdgarLovecraft]

Good message clarity and rhythm

[New Theory]

Thank you EdgarLovecraft. :)

[Dayran]

A good clear communication and statement ... on hope ... faith ... and on what's really important in life. Do you think however it might help to move from the throne and seek a new effort? Nice write.

[New Theory]

Thank you so much Dayran, Yes, I think that this broken throne is something on which we all sit, it represents our past grievances, the mistakes which we had made earlier and regretting that we never made that, this is the baggage that everyone carries with themselves.

And I think that moving on from this throne will really help; i.e getting over the past mistakes and moving on.

I am happy at your insight.

[Angel M]

Ah I love you write your poems. Also the term "broken throne" and the last line really hit home.

[New Theory]

Thank you. You are kind :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very interesting poem you have penned my friend.Maybe we are all sitting on our broken throne and praying for the days when things will get better :)

[New Theory]

Thank you Vidya, we all are waiting for it indeed.