Patience

Patience my friend is not just a virtue,
It's the need of the hour.
For what I say to you It is true.
Seeds don't become a tree just after you sow.
To eat the sweet fruit you have to let the plant grow

Reviews

[Saumya]

very short but very true and deep lines .... patience really is the essence. every great thing comes to the only one who possesses this virtue, "patience" above all else:)! n almost everyone who is unsuccessful somewhere, its at times this patience that holds them back!

simple yet incredible write:)
well done n happy writing:)

saumya

[New Theory]

Thanks Soumya, hope to see more of your writing and do check out my stories whenever you have time. Your profile states that you are a horror fan. If that is so I would really be happy to collaborate with you and create some good horror.

[Saumya]

youre welcome:) n much welcomed to read and review my poems... i hope you enjoy my writes:) n yeah, u r right i am a big fan of horror as i had already stated, nd it will be really great if i can work on something with horror...i'd really love to!:)

[New Theory]

I have an idea of a story, writing it now, will share with you when I am done with it. Yes I do enjoy your work. Hope for more of it in near future. :). Meanwhile you can check one of my story and give your valuable input, "Red Green Blue". If you are free or whenever you can find time.

[Saumya]

yeah sure, mail me about the information regarding the story, i'll be glad to work on it:)

[New Theory]

Its in my profile you can read it, let me share you the link.
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/new%20theory/1327938/

[Saumya]

:) i was asking about the new story we have to work on:) n dnt wry i'll read and review your story as soon as i can:)

[New Theory]

ohh sorry my bad. :). Will do so right away.

[Saumya]

its ok..no prob.:)

[Bowers]

very deep, the length does not matter when you are able to portray such feeling in such few words, great write!

[New Theory]

Thank you so much Bowers :) .

[Bowers]

your welcome!

[Amal N]

A simple short poem yet a very amazing and deep one, loved it!

[New Theory]

Thank you :)

[UC Poika]

You know something. I like your poetry. Great idea.

[New Theory]

Thanks so much :) :) :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very wise words my friend.But sadly I am very impatient my family all laugh about just how much :)

[New Theory]

I am just as patient as a dog is with its play ball.

[Vidya Bacchus]

That patient huh lol

[New Theory]

............................ :P

[Radhika]

Very true! I like the example you have given and its such a good rhyme!

[New Theory]

Thank you Radhika :), so sweet of you to review my work.

[Radhika]

You are welcome

[Angel M]

Short but the depth is amazing. I agree of this and nice poem. :)

[New Theory]

Thank you Manuel :)

[PurpleQuartz]

Very true and a very good write :)

[New Theory]

Thank you :)

[Anita Singh]

True and full of wisdom. Simply written.

[New Theory]

Thanks annabella, this is actually my struggle with being patient to write something. Stories and ideas always in my mind but I am never patient to jot it down completely.

[Anita Singh]

Oh! so you are talking to yourself here. I like that.

[New Theory]

Yes I am trying to wake myself up from this slumber. I am very lazy.

[Mel Lisa]

this is full of wisdom and truth! good one!

[New Theory]

Thanks Melecia :)