World

World

A Poem by New New
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I cared about a girl very much, the feeling wasn't mutual.

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I blinked, and the world around me vanished
Just me, myself and my crazy thoughts
I'm now faced with a blank canvas
Free to rebuild the world as I please
I have no idea where to begin

Most people would start with streets
Then move to buildings and cars
And top it off with trees and scenery
I put all of that and more back in
Yet it was still lacking something

As I gazed upon my bitter masterpiece
Taking everything in, bit by bit
I realized it would never be complete
You were my world, now you're gone
Spare me this torture
Please come back.

© 2012 New New


Author's Note

New New
I realize this isn't very good.

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I know this pain. It sucks, and holding onto hope is all you can do.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 11, 2012
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moline, IL



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