A day which will live in infamy

I've gone mad!

It was played across all major news networks

Every house hold was made aware

Parents warned their children

Fear could be sensed in the air

Unlocked doors became a thing of the past

The grip on reality was fading all too fast

There's a madman running loose in the streets

The kind who makes people hide under their sheets

Tell your neighbor, everyone must know:

Today marks the day where I lost CONTROL.

Author's Note

I'm not crazy or anything XD

Reviews

[Hayley]

This sounds very lyrical, and the word strongly and emotionally reinforced.
Nice rhythm to it and flow- just be sure not to pick your rhymes just to fit with the scheme. The piece becomes more centered structurally when they seem effortless. Nice work!

[closed..acct]

Very nicely done, like the rhyme scheme and flow

[falling_toxic_rain]

really nice flow.! x) got your point across.