Natural Brightness

There's nothing I love more than sunshine.

Once I arise, I take a look outside

It's hard to believe, even with my own two eyes

I was momentarily blinded by the sun in my face

Then I hopped out of bed and began the race

The race against time, how much could I accomplish before I have to say goodbye

To that big bright object way up in the sky.

The sunlight today was absolutely radiating

I looked over at my dog and swore that he was smiling

Who could blame him? He's mans best friend

I'm praying for extra sunlight, I don't want this day to end

I haven't done much of anything, I haven't even left the room

I'll probably play Call of Duty, It's time to own some noobs!

Oh! How rude, enough about me.

How about you?

Reviews

[falling_toxic_rain]

tells about what i think everyone in life at some point think, and the ending being a tension reliever. i like it.:)

[Lizzy I]

this poem made me laugh! good job!

[Tasha]

This was amazing. I really liked the ending it made me laugh. Well done.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Herl Rodrin]

As I read the every line, I can compare sunlight to life. This is a great composition. And the last part is so cool. I like it!

[Callista-Jade]

Really awesome poem. It made me laugh at the end. Good job, keep writing!

[nicolo]

I had a big "AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA" in the last part. :)