Three Weeks

A poem I made for my third week with my boyfriend.

There's an incandescence, love 

Between us, you and me 

This non-fleeting heat from my cheeks 

Makes a spark in my heart 

And it's lasted, so far, three weeks 

If you rub my hand 

This luminescence 

Will glow and radiate, 

With embers in my mind, 

And eliminate all hate 

This epoch of limerance is real 

And hopefully eternal 

The sonorous sound of your voice is mellifluous 

And nothing can get in between you and me, us 

Except this wonderful feeling that we share 

And have shared 

For three weeks

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

The words and sounds play off each other gracefully and was such a delight to read.
Thank you for sharing!

[Chadvonswan]

Loved the words you used in this piece. "The" is my favorite. (:

[ANTO]

"The sonorous sound of your voice is mellifluous
And nothing can get in between you and me, us
Except this wonderful feeling that we share " - Pure eloquence Ariana. Your whole outlook has been transformed by this new relationship. It is so evident in the words here.
You couldn't have displayed your happiness more if you'd written "Three weeks, two days, eight hours, 10 ten minutes and 30...no make that 32 seconds."
God Bless you both
:)))

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Thanks. He really is an amazing and humble guy. I think he's the one.

[ANTO]

All the best Ariana.
:))