Various Remnants of Heartbreak - Negatively Optimistic

Various Remnants of Heartbreak - Negatively Optimistic

A Poem by Ariana Omnomnom
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I get sad a lot and cry out poems.

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Maybe I'm positively miserable
Optimistically sad
Maybe there's a beautiful tear
That only sadness sheds
Maybe I cry comfort
Maybe pain heals
Maybe I'm okay
Just being alone

A sad, sad look
On a small, little face
Looking at air for love
And gets nothing in return
Is it bad that I cling to myself?
Much hated self-reliance
Is it bad that I hate what I need?
Cold is real
Maybe I'm just scared and alone

© 2015 Ariana Omnomnom


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Beautifully written for the reade. Sad.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ariana Omnomnom

9 Years Ago

Yeah I was pretty sad.
There is a beauty - a terrible beauty in sadness. Sadness is a feeling, an emotion like any other but when it becomes our only or our prevalent emotion then we maybe need to start delving into the Whys and you did that very eloquently in the second stanza. Self reliance is a fine trait but again when it becomes the overwhelming trait in our dealings with the world it can become a negative. The final line is a true glimmer - a real gem of insight in a write full of self-exploration.
Well penned Ariana. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Ariana Omnomnom
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