Random Poems - poem 1

Just off the top of my head.

Blowing bubbles in my drink
Cuz I like to think, think, think
Hiding my eyes from the sun
Hiding inside from everyone
Take a sip of a drink
Please don't send me a wink
Rest my face on the side
I feel so weary eyed
Just to take a nap
Thoughts as slow as sticky sap
My heavy lids do fall
I'm so big, your voice is small
Warm blueberry drink
Makes my liveliness sink
I am falling asleep
I won't make a single peep

Reviews

[Suvada]

I like the fact that this poem rhymes good job :)

[Calamity]

Feels like one of those moments when thoughts weigh heavy and we grow tired of the weight.
Bravo.

[Ariana Omnomnom]

I was sitting at my dining table yesterday and I was half awake but this poem came to me.

[stars are far]

that was very nice work. i loved how you penned this :D
well done :)

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Thanks! I was just falling asleep.

[stars are far]

hehe my pleasure dear

[Ariana Omnomnom]

This is probably literally my only nondepressing poem on here.

[stars are far]

I will try checking other works :)

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Oh thank you!