Waiting

Hospital Rhymes

Waiting, Waiting

My patience is deflating

My sadness on the rise

That's my soul's demise

Waiting, Waiting

All of them are hating

Me, myself, and I

So I start to cry

Waiting, Waiting

They are raiding

All my happiness

Now I'm such a mess

Waiting, Waiting

In my life just wading

Trying to have fun

But I'm the only one

Waiting, Waiting

They are just invading

Overtake my soul

Crush my only goal

Waiting, Waiting

They are simply baiting

So I'll come around

Push me in the ground

Waiting, Waiting

I'm not good at mating

Everyone's afraid

Look at the mistake I made

Author's Note

This is old, I wrote it in the hospital.

Reviews

[Playing with Demons]

The reputation is very good, it puts emphasis on that word and adds an eerie feel
I love the rhyme because when paired with a darker mood/tone it makes the poem appear as if someone's innocence has been taken away or they aren't the same child they used to be
Very nice write!

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Psych ward poetry, what can I say? lol

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Also I think you mean repetition ;P

[Playing with Demons]

Haha yep sorry ima s****y typer
And what happened? I've been in psych ward and met weird people that were really nice but strange and one if them was really scary but he just talked to himself

[Ariana Omnomnom]

My mind is a maze, and I am a lost wanderer.

[Playing with Demons]

Wow that was deep.... damn

[Ariana Omnomnom]

I was in there for a month one time.

I don't go to school.
I have a lot of thinking time.

[Playing with Demons]

Why not? School sucks but I have a job I want so I'm actually trying this year

[Ariana Omnomnom]

You should read my newest poem, it's actually recent.

Also because my anxiety makes me sick and claustrophobic.

[Playing with Demons]

Well can't you take medicine for that? That's what they made me do after I went to that food hospital. Ugh I hated that place and I was there the WHOLE SUMMER

[Ariana Omnomnom]

/: Yes but I have to go to sleep before it works. I get worked up too quickly.
I have a dangerous cocktail of mental health issues.

[Playing with Demons]

Hahaha according to my therapists same
*high fives*
Let's be insane together lol

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Not a good idea, let's be medically stabilized together!!

[Playing with Demons]

Meh, I can see the benefits in that but I can use my inability to focus to annoy people which is fun if I'm in the mood

[Ariana Omnomnom]

That's so immature, can't we do paper crafts or something?

[Playing with Demons]

Paper crafts is utterly dull and being immature is awesome on levels unknown to all except gandalf because he is amazing like Spock and Daryl Dixon

[Ariana Omnomnom]

But...I love papercrafts...

You didn't read my poem, breh

[Playing with Demons]

Ooh sorry I forgot, I'll hop right to it!!!