Broken City

Broken City

Land of lost lovers

You make me pity

Myself under the covers

I came here when I lost my man

Now I come to visit when I can

Your Sadness lane, your Teardrop st

That's where lost lovers sometimes meet

You're Heartbreak Hotel

Brings me to Hell

Reminds me of all the dark days I lived with you

Broken City

Well, I left you the way you left me

Cold, and all alone

Without a home

But now I have my baby

I love him and maybe

You'll find love too

Author's Note

This is very old

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

This may be an old piece, but it is beautifully written! I love how you put sadness into it and told a story. We all deserve love and I feel that we will find it, if we have endured heartbreak or rejection in some point in our lives. Very nicely done :)

[Ariana Omnomnom]

It's actually a part of a series, and sadness lane is just one of the series. You can find it on my profile.
I've been through an awful lot of heartbreak and rejection, I'm starting to see a trend.

[Relic]

Nice and uplifting. Glad to see you wrote something with a happy ending. :)

[Ariana Omnomnom]

My troubles in life had lightened for a short period while my mood stabilizers had started coming into affect.

[Relic]

Well, good for your moo stabalizers.

[Ariana Omnomnom]

They ended up making me gain about 50 lbs and resulted in a meds change that wound me up in the hospital.

[Relic]

Ohhhh, well bad for your mood stabilizers than. :(

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Yeah I seem to be on a good combination now though.

[Relic]

Well, good for your good combination than. :)

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Thanks! It really helps with my bipolar and depression.

[Relic]

Well, down with those two...boooooo.

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Yeah and ADHD and my mild autism.

I really got the pick of the crop with this bag of goodies.

[Relic]

hahaha. We all have our problems. You just have more maybe. Hmm?

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Definitely.

[Vishuddha]

Without any problems life would be a bore.

[Jamestown]

It may be old. But still good, thanks for sharing.

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Thank you.