How did it end with us?

And with every passing day, my dear

I feel as if my yearning for you deepens

And with every word that I utter

One knows that it carried its weight for you

When you scatter your light for me to reach

Only then do I become aware
Of the imploring sadness behind your touch

The million tiny ‘feelings’ you had buried

For myself to stay oblivious

At your sufferings and tears

Reviews

[berenongur]

With every word a cut opened up through my heart, deeper and deeper and deeper. I feel your pain.

[Mk.t.g]

thanku for reading bestieeeee

[NelliKong]

I felt the raw emotion froths piece; it displays such vulnerability that cannot be denied.

[Mk.t.g]

thanku so muchh

[Re-Pete]

wow. deep and touching in the emotional gut. made me want to reach for a hanky. great accompanying pic too. nice work.

[Mk.t.g]

thanku for reading, pete!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

So poignant and tender, a great write from you. I enjoyed the read.

[Mk.t.g]

Thanku for reading!