Don't mourn

Don't mourn for me
forever in each passing day
the grief tortures
I am not the one you wanted me to be
I am but a broken dream

They say, all good things must end

Reviews

[Ruby]

It's sad but beautiful . amazing how you put all the words in a small poem

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for reading! :)

[Ruby]

It's a pleasure

[AYVID N]

A sad poem, dear Mktg.
Indeed, all good things must end, perhaps for better things to begin.

Beautifully written.

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for commenting, Divya!

[AYVID N]

You're so welcome 🙋‍♀️💕

[D. Mansfield]

They say all things must end, they don't have to be good.i love the poem

[jun]

1. this is deep
2. you are so talented fr im jealous *insert sad pensive face*

[jun]

slay bestie !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lia]

SLAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

[jun]

I CANT LMAOOOO

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks jun and lia!

[Seriana]

To every ending, there is a new beginning. Might the end bring new hope.

[JENNY]

Heart touching “ I’m but a broken dream” this line is so amazing I can feel it to the deepest. Thanks for sharing Mk.t.g .

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for commenting, Jenny!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

This is such a profound and powerful write Mk. So resonant. We regret and we grieve. Sometimes it breaks us. Sometimes it strengthens us. Either way, we try to find the way to journey through it. Your words are on-point and well-chosen. I wish you happiness and peace for the new year.

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for such a kind comment, Annette! Happy New Year to you too!

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to mourn. Allowed the heart and mind to heal. I liked the honest and direct words. You left the reader with more questions than answers. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks for reviewing, Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.